You Flee👣

Sunrise come
And you’re gone
Oh! beloved,
As flowers bloom
You fade, but
As I breath,
You’re the scent
As music beats
you’re the lyrics.
As I forget,
You exceed.

Thou, Love for you
are unsettled
beneath the aches
still can’t stop
for love on you
are still constant.

Hard to go
even letting  go
but I’ll do
So, will be happy
as wind continously blows
the memories we do.

Friendly Love

Am not as perfect as your beloved;
but abundance in love;
be careful of my heart,
don’t allow it,
be a cactus heart.

The night falls;
as our shadow fades;
memories left,
under the moonlight,
as grasses swayed;
our hearts beat,
sing a song,
it’s not the end.

Nightmares are you;
dreams could be you,
live by you;
you are such true.

Cracking! cracking…
Stone..dd, my beloved:'(
my one true love.
(keep finding)
Lost.. You’re lost,
in a dream, I’m dreaming
that you’re mine.
Totally, just a dream.

The day comes: mourning,
Your soul is beyond;
like I become You.

H..mmm I and You,
entwined together,
to satisfy the souls
that quench over souls’
think of us like in vain,
but not hyprocrite being;
as sorrows we’ve been facing
our love ascends
and transmits as if chem,
Keep singing in the midst.

Time goes,
Love been doubted,
keep fleeing beneath;
but restrained from cracking,
Oh! thy You, such poetry are you?
thirst of answers,
unspoken questions;
you keep thy heart hanging,
oh! Thy heart dying,
hunting Love that was unreal,
and keeps fading.

Pains are bubbling,
tears were falling,
I am broken.

(*sob) happiness made by you,
destroyed also you;
always there for you,
Now I know, Am worthless
in you.

( feels the pain)
Crying in grief,
thy beloved, I am hurt
by your misgraced.
(*sob*sob) but will
Love you till’ the day,
there is none.

Title: Not Okay, Cupid
Author: Heidi R. King

Part I

1. Reflection
  Love, is seems to be a battle which there could be a winner and a losser for it’s a competition of the one who has an effort vs.  the one who hasn’t an effort since it contributes to the one you wanted to be with you hence she/he loves it. Move on is the simpliest thing that everyone would say to you if you are broken but it is the hardest thing to do espicially if your world was with him. Love…Love…
 
I was expecting that Hazil and his boyfriend would be a best couple for they spent thier time together suddenly my expectations fall when it turns out that Hazil’s boyfie cheated on her with her ultimate bestfriend.
I am so disappointed when someone already know that someone has a Lover yet they still can bear it to fall in love with it..Betrayal and infedelity is the worst enemy that a couple would encounter.

It sucks, if both people you trust most is the one that would cause pain in breaking your heart.

Never trust.

Consequently, it isn’t the end of your story there will always be someone  that would come along, will protect and will love you.

For me, its what we call perfect time when Hazil’s seems to be brother, her former bestfriend brother was too kind to her and gentle. They agreed that they would act as if in a relarionship that dare make them both fell in love in a way that different from before what they felt. So, Second try is worth it. We all deserve to love and be love.

2. Connection
I can compare these to a short film of a newyorker girl who has a perfect boyfriend yet he doesn’t know that his boyfriend is waiting for the right time to broke her for his boyfriend is In Love with his friend whom there guests everytime they celebrated there anniversary.

    Also, to a teleserye Tubig at Langis wherein betrayal and  infedility is portrayed even klara(Isabelle) knew that Natoy( Zan Joe) is a married man. Klara is the reason of why Natoy’s family is shattered into pieces.

3. Questions
   I wonder why some people destroys thier friendship just to get someone they love? How Hazil determine before that his boyfriend is perfect for her? Is hazil really angry or not? Do hazil really Love his boyfriend before? How can Hazil’s one and only friend betrayed her? Is she envy? or what?

4. Prediction
  Hazil and her present will not be a perfect couple but will long last for they already know how to handle things. That rough experience would be there strenght to be a good and a reponsible in holding tight and they always think for unending love..

Part 2( #17 You have become a character in your novel. Describe what you felt.. Describe this in detail.like a diary….)

Dear Diary,
      
                 I wished, I would become a wind that even if no one sees me they felt how Sad I am. I am completely shattered. I thought, She is my bestfriend, a sister I didn’t think that she would create pain in my heart. She broke me that I felt like I don’t wanna exist I wanna go and kill myself. But no, I won’t allow them  especilly that Jerk, stupid and shit I wanna take avenge for what he did to me. Of all the people, How could he?

I thought He woudn’t do to hurt me. I am in pain. I felt it was my fault. But No I do my part as a good girlfriend. I supported him. But how could he? How..

I will do everything that they wouldn’t see that they ruined me. I will make my plan.. I will take avenge…I will kill them..

Well, I’ll used someone so my ex would get jealous and be back to me. Oh! God.. And what for if he would come back? does it changed that they cheated on me? would mirror be back into its original place after what had happen?

I hate them.
I don’t wanna trust.
I don’t wanna love.
I am broje.into pieces.
I am full of hate..I hate them..

I hate them..

   Yours truly,
        Che💔

    

Title: He loves me not
Author: Christine Kersey
Part I

1. Reflection
It was sudden to a person who still survived despite of rough things happened. Loss of Parents. No relatives. Alone.

For me, it was tough for lily to continue her journey inspite of all the baggages she is in, the sadness and she only had the money being left to her by her dad. But fate seems to be playful to her when she met a guy named trevor upon entering in her school. Trevor captured her innocence heart. Lily  automatically fall in love. And as the days goes, Trevor courted her and they became couple. They got married. And now, I realize that lily is stupid for she didn’t use her mind in saying YES to a person she just know for a months. She is blinded with love. I can’t imagine the violence, torture being grant by trevor towards lily. For that, It is really needed to think twice nor thrice  first before deciding into something that your life security is going to be okey after all. Also, Choose a right person you are going to lived with.

2. Connection
I can connect this to one of my, shall I say friend for we live in a same town. Her name is Sha-Sha, she grow in Manila and she became my niegbhor in 2013 if am not mistaken ofcourse in a barangay if you are new boys would like and court you. Jun-Jun is from our barangay also, he courted Sha-Sha for a couple months and they live together a Live in partner rather. But Sha-Sha didn’t know that this Jun-jun is a drug addict and do violence things like slap her and etc. So, now she can’t blame her fate for
she is the one making her own descision for herself.

3. Questions
I wonder why Lily is still inlove with Trevor inspite what trevor made. Is Love corrupt mind? or It makes live makes life miserable? is it necessary for us to love someone or can we not love someone? Is lily really love trevor or its jusr an indatuation? Could trevor locate lily after running?

4. Prediction
I think Lily would be happy in her life with her baby. And Trevor would be in jail forever. Lily would be a good mother to his child still in her womb.

Part 2( #32 Write a letter to one of the character)

Dear Lily,
   
           Hi.
            I just wanna say be responsible to your child. Future maybe unclear to both of you, just be brave like what you did when your parents are gone. You can’t blame your fate. Everything that had happen had thier reasons why. Just live life with an abundance love to your child. Be a mother. Don’t mind your past its in the history. Juat be happy you are safe now and your child.

                   Love,
          Cherel R. Omeles

PART 1
Title: My Heart and other black hole
Author: Jasmine Warga

A.Reflection
We all have our sadness, especially when the one we love leaves us with or without reasons.

For me, it was wrong for Aysel to think that she would grow up same as his father who is imprisoned because of homicide case. And to think that suicidal is the key in order to escape from her fate. In contrary with the other character named Roman who thinks that he is the reason why her sister died in the bath. The thing is Roman wouldn’t kill himself without a partner. So, that is the time when the two characters met. We may have our stupidities and mistakes in life but it doesn’t mean that killing yourself is the best solution to escape from guilt. I guess both characters just need Love for it is the only thing that could change bitterness into sweetness. As I read along, I am surprised when Roman did the suicidal by himself yet Aysel came along in rescue and find out that Roman’s heart is still beating and he is still alive. Maybe, Roman’s sadness could be seen but Aysel is filling it with her Love so Roman could have the reason to Live.

B.Connection
It was our MAPEH Subject in High School when our teacher showed to us one of his student drawing (portrait of a person who is sleeping) it seems to be a neither dead body even if it’s in a horizontal nor vertical. Because of curiosity one of our classmates asked “who draw that?”Then, Sir answered “the one who do suicidal yesterday morning” an added “ he thinks that he has no reason to live because his family died in a car accident”. Sir, felt regret with the guy for he hasn’t know chance to talked to him.

C.Questions
Is suicidal a key to escape from fate and sadness? I can’t also figure out why the two characters attempt to do suicidal if they had a loving family who would feel the grief if they would do it. Is it also possible that what your parents had done might be you in the future?

D. Predictions
I think Aysel and Roman would start with the new chapter of their lives with joy, hopes and dreams with forgiveness in their heart. Also, there experiences might be the root of their good relationship to built up and became their lessons to always think before doing thing. They would end up as husband and wife in the future.

Part 2 (#9 Describe your feelings about the Characters. Copy down a quote from a character and tell why you think it is meaningful)

Well, I have this feeling of anger to both characters for I always believe that there are always answers we just need to be smart enough to find it. But my anger vanishes when Aysel realizes everything that suicidal is not the key. And even if Roman did it still she is able to rescue Roman and do her best to explain things straight that they have reasons to live.

Consequently, I love this quote when Aysel state this “Doesn’t have to do with how our perception of things can’t always be trusted, like our human mind is too slow to be able to fully comprehend things that are fast”. For me it is meaningful because we always decide to things easily and didn’t easily realize what the consequence that may come out might be our lost. Simply means that how we view life is depending to our emotions, opinions all is subjective.

 

Title: The Avery show Experiment

Author: Kelly Oram

Part I

1.REFLECTION

Have you tried to fall in love with your best friend and looked at you just a friend?

I felt it was strong enough for Avery to proposed a theory, a scientific study rather of overcoming a heartbreak as her official entry for the Utah State Science fair of their school. And I did not expect that she could come up with her seven stages on how to heal a broken heart which are disbelief, denial, bargaining, guilt, anger, depression, and acceptance. To think that she used herself as a subject of the study she made, that makes me amaze.I hated to the one who broke Avery’s heart which is Aiden, Avery’s childhood, best friend and almost everything to her because they grow up together. Aiden made a wrong decision to throw away their relationship just because his girlfriend doesn’t want Avery as his friend. Consequently, I was surprised to the next thing that had happen for Greyson, brother of Aiden, famous in school, a womanizer and always called Avery and Aiden as a “Dork” became Avery’s savior in times that Avery was been rejected by Aiden his brother. In Addition, I felt happy seeing a womanizer (Greyson) found himself falling in love to a girl who was been at his side but he does not recognizes and just seeing her as a sister. Then, that is the time i realized that people would change into better in the name of love and for me it makes love sweet as it is. When the story is going to end, I felt angry to Aiden for he just found out that he also love Avery as what Avery felt for him that makes Avery confused and let him kissed her in order to know what spark would come but nothing had happen same as what he felt for Greyson when they kissed for the first time. And I salute Avery for making a right decision that he really Love Greyson and told Aiden the truth. There experiment was successful and became true to theirselves I felt happy when the story ended I imagine Avery and Greyson as a couple and I believe that Second chance of love is worth it to find and wait.

 

  1. CONNECTION

I had a friend before named Phil, I thought we were compatible in many ways because when I transferred a school to CCES he also decided to be with me. I am so happy for deep in me thinking that he might not want to lose me, maybe he wanted to be with me forever I liked him a lot since we had many in common. When we were almost a year in the said school Yes! We are okey but I found out he had no time for me and even don’t talk to me as if we are strangers. Then, that’s the time I just found out that he had a girlfriend without telling me. I felt shattered. Yet, I still manage to stand up and continue my life without him. Until now, we  remain friends despite of what had happen. Even if its hard to accept but I did I surpassed the seven stages what Avery had just done.

Also, I can connect this story to a Korean movie I Remember You because the persecutor there which is a girl fall in love to a kid before who was been involve in the crime. They became friends when they grow up. Although, the boy always rejected the girl and told her that “ Your not my type” still she managed to stand up and do her best that the boy would  soon recognizes her.

3.QUESTIONS

I can’t figure out why Greyson do not see Avery before as something a girlfriend type and only found out Avery when his brother broke Avery’s heart? Also, I was confused is Avery’s life only evolve to the two brothers? I can’t also imagine how would Avery deal with the two brother specially she and Greyson are now couple? Is what Avery felt for Aiden before is just an infatuation? And it is different to Greyson?

 

  1. PREDICTIONS

I think that Avery and Greyson are really distained for each other and the problem that Avery had before is a bridge that they would found theirselves together. Also, I think that Aiden now is blaming himself letting Avery being with his brother.

Part II ( Write a letter to the author)

Dear Ms. Author,

Good Day!

I just wanna say Thank You for making this story really amazing to inform me not only I but also many people around the world that instead of going to suicide because someone broke there heart, they will inspired by your write ups that allow them to stand up, that second chances are always worth to wait for. Ms. Author, I am waiting for your next story with the character Aiden. I wanted to know what will be his story after what happened. I do appreciate Ms. Author if you would continue your book with him.

Again, Thank You very much Ms. Author hope to read your books as soon as you published more because I do like the way you write for as a teenager even those adult who have been rejected and felt the “Friend Zone” thingy will still have the courage that the wounds in their heart would be healed as long as they tried to continue their life even though how hard it is.

For you to know Ms. Author I have read this book of yours five times for I love every stages you write about it specially the Denial part for I experienced it all the time. I am looking forward for your next write ups Ms. Author. God bless.

                           Love  

                     Cherel Omeles

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